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用AI写作的人说:别用AI写作Don’t Write With AI, Say People Who Write With AI

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你的“作弊”是他们的“辅助工具”。人工智能一词的诞生地正以一种恰如其分的方式庆祝该领域70岁生日:爆发一起学术诚信丑闻。上个月,达特茅斯学院校长西安·莉亚·贝洛克在《大西洋月刊》发表题为《为什么我希望达特茅斯拥有更多AI》的文章。如今,贝洛克正启动审查,以确定其首席副手是否过度使用AI。

Your “cheating” is their “assistive tool.”The university where the term artificial intelligence was coined is ringing in the field’s 70th birthday in fitting fashion: with an academic-integrity scandal. Last month, Dartmouth College’s president, Sian Leah Beilock, published an essay in The Atlantic headlined: “Why I Want More AI at Dartmouth.”Now Beilock is launching a review of whether her top deputy used too much AI.

9月21日,学生报纸《达特茅斯报》报道,教务长圣地亚哥·施内尔似乎严重依赖AI撰写了他今年发表的所有九篇文章——其中包括一篇关于学生将写作外包给AI的《华盛顿邮报》评论文章。施内尔对指控的回应并未帮到他。据该学生报透露,他发送了一份电子邮件声明,承认在写作中使用AI聊天机器人作为“辅助工具”,但淡化了它们在其创作过程中的作用。

On September 21, the student newspaper The Dartmouth reported that Provost Santiago Schnell appeared to have relied heavily on AI to write all nine of the articles he’s published this year—including a Washington Post op-ed about students outsourcing their writing to AI. Schnell’s response to the accusation didn’t help his cause. According to the student paper, he sent an email statement acknowledging that he uses AI chatbots as “assistive tools” in his writing but downplayed their role in his process.

甚至连施内尔的声明,该报发现,在Pangram——一种虽不完美但错误率极低的AI检测服务——上也被标记为“100%由AI撰写”。达特茅斯发言人告诉我,贝洛克和施内尔均拒绝就此事置评。

Even Schnell’s statement, the paper found,ed as “100% AI-written” on Pangram, an AI-detection service that is imperfect but boasts a very low error rate. A Dartmouth spokesperson told me that neither Beilock nor Schnell would comment for this story.

Schnell 是这一讽刺现象的最新例证:那些工作涉及撰写 AI 适当用途文章、甚至为他人制定 AI 使用规则的人,却屡屡被发现用 AI 来完成这些工作。有位澳大利亚大学教授,其刊登的评论文章强调学生亲自写作的重要性,结果被揭露至少部分由 AI 生成。有位非营利组织高管,其关于 AI 时代真相未来的著作,竟包含 AI 捏造的引语。

Schnell is the latest example of an ironic phenomenon: People whose job involves writing about the appropriate uses of AI—or even setting the rules on AI use for others—keep getting caught using AI to do it. There was the Australian university professor whose op-ed about the importance of students doing their own writing turned out to be at least partly AI-generated. There was the nonprofit executive whose book about the future of truth in the AI age turned out to include quotes fabricated by AI.

有位 AI 领域记者,据称因不慎将 AI 编造的引语复制进稿件而丢了工作。还有位斯坦福大学错误信息专家,其支持反 AI 深度伪造法案的声明被发现包含 ChatGPT 幻觉生成的引文,结果被法官训斥。

There was the AI beat reporter who reportedly lost his job after he accidentally copied quotes invented by AI into one of his stories. And there was the Stanford misinformation expert who got upbraided by a judge when his declaration supporting an anti-AI-deepfake law turned out to contain ChatGPT-hallucinated citations.

公开或理直气壮地拥抱 AI 写作是一回事,比如那位亿万富翁金融家坦然承认技术在其《华尔街日报》评论文章中的作用(尽管也是在被发现后才承认);但利用 AI 来抨击 AI 的不当用法则是另一回事,这引出了一个尴尬的问题:为什么那些对技术陷阱警告得最响亮的人,自己却不断头重脚轻地栽进去?

It’s one thing to embrace AI writing openly or shamelessly, like the billionaire financier who readily acknowledged the technology’s role in his Wall Street Journal op-ed (albeit only after it was discovered). It’s another to use AI to inveigh against improper uses of AI, and it raises an awkward question: Why do some of the people warning us most loudly about the technology’s pitfalls keep tumbling headfirst into them?

我联系了上文提到的所有五位人士寻求回应,但唯一同意实名接受我采访的是史蒂文·罗森鲍姆,他是《真相的未来:AI如何重塑现实》一书的作者,也是非营利组织可持续媒体中心的执行董事。与其他几位不同,罗森鲍姆披露了他在写作和编辑过程中使用AI的情况,且从未试图劝阻他人使用AI。但这并未能让他避免蒙羞——今年5月,《纽约时报》报道称他的新书充斥着AI生成的错误引语。

I reached out to all five of the individuals listed above for an answer, but the only one who agreed to speak with me on the record was Steven Rosenbaum, the author of the book The Future of Truth: How AI Reshapes Reality and the executive director of the nonprofit Sustainable Media Center. Unlike some of the others, Rosenbaum disclosed his use of AI in the writing and editing process, and he has never tried to tell other people not to use it. But that didn’t save him from ignominy when The New York Times reported in May that the book was riddled with AI-generated misquotes.

当时我与他交谈过,他告诉我自己感到被ChatGPT“背叛”了。五个月过去了,罗森鲍姆似乎开始承担更多错误责任。他告诉我,正准备出版修订版,修正所有错误,并加入作者说明和一个新章节(还能是什么?),主题是AI幻觉。不过,他仍认为过错更多在于技术的制造者而非使用者。“作为一种技术,它极具诱惑力,”他说。

I spoke with him at the time, and he told me that he felt “betrayed” by ChatGPT. Five months on, Rosenbaum seems to have accepted a bit more responsibility for the mistakes. He told me that he is preparing to publish a revised version of his book with all of the errors corrected, an author’s note, and a new chapter on (what else?) AI hallucinations. He still believes that the fault lies more with the technology’s makers than its users, though. “As a technology, it is incredibly seductive,” he said.

罗森鲍姆表示,他最初使用AI是为了更好地理解这项技术。渐渐地,他开始依赖它作为写作伙伴,让工作变得既更轻松也不再孤单。他将与AI共写的经历描述为一个混乱的过程,在这个过程中,人类的工作与机器的工作纠缠在一起,难以分离。“思考、研究、阅读、大纲、起草和写作之间的界限变得非常模糊,”他说。

Rosenbaum said that he’d started out using AI to better understand the technology. He’d gradually come to rely on it as a writing partner that made the work both easier and less lonely. He described his experience of writing with AI as a messy process, one in which the work of the human and that of the machine get all tangled up. “The line between thinking and researching and reading and outlining and drafting and writing is really blurry,” he said.

当然,一个简单的解决办法是完全不用 AI。然而,Rosenbaum 对此毫无兴趣。他说,他仍打算把聊天机器人当作写作伙伴——只是现在会“更谨慎”地使用,在采纳其观点和引用前会反复核实。他并非唯一一个不愿放弃那些让他陷入麻烦的工具的人。虽然每个因用 AI 警示 AI 而被抓包的人都以某种形式公开回应了此事,但没有人表示彻底弃用这项技术。

A simple solution, of course, would be not to use AI at all. Rosenbaum, however, has no interest in that. He said that he still plans to use chatbots as a writing companion—just “more carefully” now, double-checking all of their claims and citations before adopting them. He’s not alone in his unwillingness to abandon the tools that got him in trouble. Although each of the people caught using AI to warn about AI has commented publicly on the episode in some form, none responded by swearing off the technology.

Rosenbaum 认为,我们正走向一个用 AI 写作成为常态、唯有结果最重要的世界。“我不觉得读者在意香肠是怎么做出来的,”他说,“他们只在意好不好吃。”

Rosenbaum, for his part, thinks we’re headed toward a world in which writing with AI is the norm and all that matters is the result. “I don’t think readers care how the sausage is made,” he said. “They care that it’s delicious.”

我对此不太确信。我自己也尝试过把 AI 当作写作中的研究工具。但《大西洋月刊》严禁使用 AI 生成的散文,我自己也有同样的规定。我发现设立个人底线既实用又明确:我可能会向聊天机器人提问、征求它对用词或解释的反馈、或请它帮我找出论点的漏洞,但我绝不会让它替我写作,也不会在草稿中使用它的文字。

I’m not so sure. I too have experimented with using AI as a research tool in my writing. But The Atlantic has a strict policy against the use of AI-generated prose, and so do I. I’ve found that having a personal red line is both useful and clarifying: I might ask a chatbot questions, get its feedback on a word choice or an explanation, or ask it to poke holes in my argument, but I will not ask it to write for me or use its writing in my own drafts.

我认为读者看重的是:他们读到的每一个字都是作者亲自斟酌的,而非算法生成的。话虽如此,我能理解对某些人来说,用 AI 做研究和用 AI 写作的界限可能显得模糊。例如,聊天机器人的偏见有可能渗入我的思路,哪怕没有渗入我的具体措辞。(不过,Google 的搜索排名算法或我的社交媒体信息流也可能带来偏见。)

I think readers value knowing that every word they’re reading was chosen by the author and not an algorithm. That said, I can see how the distinction between using AI for research and writing could feel slippery to some. It’s conceivable, for instance, that a chatbot’s biases could be infiltrating my ideas, if not my precise words. (Then again, so could the biases of Google’s search-ranking engine or my social-media feeds.)

我还有一个理论,解释为什么那些警示他人注意 AI 的人自己却在用它。在一个与达特茅斯学院事件惊人相似的案例中,悉尼西部大学负责学术诚信的教授于 5 月发表了一篇评论文章,强调学生不应将作业委托给 AI。

I have another theory as to why people who caution others about AI seem to be using it themselves. In a scenario strikingly similar to the one at Dartmouth, the professor in charge of academic integrity at Western Sydney University wrote an op-ed in May on the importance of students not delegating their work to AI.

“不要走捷径,”该校负责质量与诚信的副校长凯斯·埃利斯在《悉尼晨锋报》上写道。“无论多么诱人,都不要将你的思考外包。”很快显而易见,这篇评论文章至少部分是由AI生成的。对此,一位大学发言人为埃利斯使用该技术辩护,称其“成熟且得当”,因为她曾将自己过往的作品输入AI工具,再请求其协助起草评论文章。埃利斯告诉《悉尼晨锋报》,这篇评论文章并非“由”AI撰写:“它是‘借助’AI写成的,两者有着天壤之别,”她说。

“Don’t cut corners,” Cath Ellis, the university’s pro-vice-chancellor for quality and integrity, wrote in The Sydney Morning Herald. “Don’t outsource your thinking, however tempting that may be.”The op-ed, it soon became clear, had been generated at least partly by AI. In that case, a university spokesperson defended Ellis’s use of the technology as “sophisticated and appropriate,” because she had fed her own past work into the AI tool before asking it to help her draft the op-ed. Ellis told The Sydney Morning Herald that the op-ed hadn’t been written “by” AI: “It was written with AI, and there’s a really big difference there,” she said.

埃利斯的辩解对她所斥责的学生来说或许站不住脚,但对我们这些试图理解这种表面虚伪的人而言,却颇具启示意义。在评论文章中,埃利斯暗示使用AI写作的学生是在将思考外包。而在为自己使用AI辩护时,她却区分了写作(她将其外包)和观点(她声称是原创的)。同样,施内尔在其评论文章中担忧“学生现在无需完成散文所代表的大部分智力劳动,就能写出熟练的散文”。然而当面对自己使用AI的质疑时,他却主张“观点和论证”的作者权归属于自己,哪怕部分文字是由机器人撰写的。

Ellis’s excuse might ring hollow to the students she chastised, but it’s revealing to those of us trying to wrap our minds around the apparent hypocrisy. In her op-ed, Ellis implied that students who use AI to write are outsourcing their thinking. In defending her own AI use, she distinguished between the writing (which she outsourced) and the ideas (which she claimed were original). Likewise, Schnell fretted in his op-ed that “students can now produce proficient prose without performing much of the intellectual work the prose appears to represent.”Yet when confronted with his own AI use, he claimed authorship of the “ideas and arguments” even if bots did some of the writing.

这些学术诚信的捍卫者或许是对的:他们的做法与学生仅将教授的作业喂给聊天机器人、再将其生成的内容原封不动交上去,确实有着本质区别。当然,学生使用AI的方式也可以更细致入微。毫无疑问,许多被指控AI作弊的学生,其辩护词听起来很像埃利斯和施内尔的说法。"写作即思考"已成为批评者指责那些使用AI工具代笔之人的常见口号。

These guardians of academic integrity might be right that what they did is meaningfully different from a student simply feeding a professor’s assignment into a chatbot and handing in whatever it spits out. Of course, students can use AI in more nuanced ways too. No doubt plenty of students accused of AI cheating have mounted defenses that sounded a lot like Ellis’s and Schnell’s. Writing is thinking has become a common refrain among critics of those who use AI tools to do their writing.

我们在为AI写作辩护的言论中反复看到的是,使用AI的人似乎并未将这一格言应用到自己身上。罗森鲍姆和斯坦福错误信息专家杰夫·汉考克等AI造假危害专家,似乎高估了自己避开AI谬误的能力。这让人联想到社会学家W·菲利普斯·戴维森在大众传媒中提出的"第三人效应":人们倾向于相信自己不受说服性信息影响,却预期它会影响他人。

What we see again and again in defenses of AI writing is that the people using AI don’t seem to apply that maxim to themselves. And experts on the perils of AI fakery such as Rosenbaum and the Stanford misinformation expert, Jeff Hancock, appeared to have overestimated their own ability to steer clear of AI falsehoods. It’s reminiscent of what the sociologist W. Phillips Davison called the “third-person effect” in mass media: people’s tendency to believe that they’re immune to persuasive messaging even as they expect it to influence others.

这是一种虚伪表现,很难对那些被抓包实践着自己所反对之事的思想领袖产生多少同情。但即便自诩AI专家的人也会因过度依赖技术而失误,这表明罗森鲍姆说到了点子上:聊天机器人或许附带"可能出错"的小字免责声明,但在与用户互动时却竭力表现得诚实可信。同样真实的是,社会尚未形成词汇来描述介于"AI生成"与"纯人工撰写"之间的各种AI协作写作方式。

It is a form of hypocrisy, and it’s hard to feel much sympathy for thought leaders who get caught practicing what they preach against. But the fact that even professed AI experts blunder into overrelying on the technology suggests that Rosenbaum is onto something: Chatbots might come with fine-print disclaimers that they can make mistakes, but they bend over backwards in their interactions with users to come across as honest and trustworthy. It’s also true that society has yet to develop a vocabulary for all the ways of writing with AI that fall in between “AI-generated” and “entirely human-written.”

我在此承认,即便我自己对AI使用的红线可能也比我意识到的更模糊。撰写本文过程中,我向谷歌和Claude阐述了论点主旨,请它们提供我可能遗漏的AI写作虚伪案例。两者均未能挖掘出我此前未知的案例。我突发奇想,又让Claude头脑风暴一些假设,解释为何AI怀疑论者可能无视自己的建议。

Here’s where I acknowledge that even my own bright line on AI use might be fuzzier than I realize. In the process of writing this story, I described the thrust of my argument to Google and Claude and asked them for examples of AI-writing hypocrisy that I may have missed. Neither managed to surface any that I hadn’t previously been aware of. On a whim, I followed up with Claude by asking it to brainstorm some hypotheses as to why AI skeptics might fail to heed their own advice.

我有自己的想法,也征求过同事的意见,但我想看看聊天机器人会给出什么建议。它的一个建议让我眼前一亮,那是我一直苦思冥想却难以言表的一个念头的更犀利版本:“写作即思考,是给别人遵守的规则,”它若有所思地说道。我没有采用Claude的措辞,但这个AI模型精准地概括了我一直在琢磨的一个概念。那个表述无疑影响了我对本文框架的思考。我现在也是个AI写作的伪君子了吗?

I had my own ideas, and I had also solicited the thoughts of colleagues, but I wanted to see what the chatbot would come up with. One of its suggestions struck me as a sharper version of a thought I’d been struggling to formulate: “Writing is thinking is a rule for other people,” it mused. I didn’t use Claude’s language, but the AI model had crisply summarized a notion I’d been thinking over. That formulation no doubt informed how I thought about this story’s framing. Am I an AI-writing hypocrite now too?

我和一位记者深入探讨了其中一些问题,这位记者曾因一篇包含AI生成错误的报道而陷入麻烦。我们在匿名条件下进行交流,因为他们说重提此事可能损害他们的求职前景。他们说吸取的教训是:“AI是一种电动工具,像任何电动工具一样,如果你粗心大意地使用它,它就是危险的。你可以是那个警告所有人‘台锯会锯断手指’的人,但有一天你自己仍可能锯断手指,因为这种风险内嵌于机器之中。你用得越多,风险就越大。”

I talked through some of this with a journalist who once got in trouble over a story that contained AI-generated errors. We corresponded on the condition of anonymity because they said that resurfacing the incident could damage their job prospects. This was the lesson they said they had learned: “AI is a power tool, and like any power tool it’s dangerous if you’re careless with it. You can be the guy who warned everyone that a table saw can cut your fingers off and still lose a finger one day, because that risk is built into the machine. It goes up the more you use it.”

照这样想来,依赖AI的人中有些人同时也在敲响AI风险的警钟,这就说得通了。他们知晓其缺陷,也知晓其威力。只是他们实在舍不得放弃这份力量。

When you think about it that way, it makes sense that some of the people relying on AI would be the same ones sounding the alarm about its risks. They know its flaws, but they also know its power. And they just can’t bring themselves to give that up.